Review: The Golden City by John Twelve Hawks
December 14, 2009 · Leave a Comment

A trilogy is a single narrative spread over three books. This can be a very satisfying way to read a long, complicated story like The Lord of Rings. Continuity is key, however, and I can’t imagine how hard it was to read those books as they were being published.
The Golden City, the last book in the Fourth Realm Trilogy by John Twelve Hawks, fell prey to this problem for me. The narrative picks up exactly where the second book, The Dark River, ends. Gabriel and Michael Corrigan, “Travelers” who can leave their bodies behind and travel among the six realms of existence, are taking separate and opposing paths. Gabriel is searching for his father among the realms, wondering what to say to his supporters, and, most urgently, planning to rescue Maya, his protector and lover. Gabriel’s brother Michael is plotting to take over the Evergreen Foundation, public face of the Brethren or Tabula, who plan to control the world and its citizens using the Vast Machine — the network of surveillance cameras and computers that track one’s every move.
The book follows Gabriel and Michael through the fifth and sixth realms, unexplored in earlier books. It also follows Maya, who is having second thoughts about the rigors of her calling as a member of the Harlequin, protector of Travelers; citizen-turned-Harlequin Hollis; and evil-doer Nathan Boone as the Brethren moved to exert full control and the Resistance organizes to stop them.
It took me quite a while to regain the feeling for the story, with which I was quite taken when I read the first two books in quick succession. The urgency of the cliff hangers had left me, and I couldn’t quite remember what the deal was with some of the minor characters. I had lost the story arc.
Consequently, The Golden City fell flat for me. The inventiveness and drive of the earlier books was not there. Instead, it felt like an ordinary finding-yourself kind of tale. There’s the good brother who has to recognize his greatness, the bad brother who must be stopped, the turncoat bad guy driven by a tragedy, and a sinister cabal scheming to take over the world. It was all very predictable, and the Vast Machine seemed like an empty threat.
I can’t say if I would have felt differently had a re-read The Traveler and The Dark River before reading The Golden City; I suspect I would have enjoyed it a bit more. I also suspect the stereotypical nature of the story, it’s lack of nuance and character development, would also have shown up in the end.
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Review: The Body in the Sleigh
December 13, 2009 · Leave a Comment
Body in the Sleigh is Katherine Hall Page’s latest entry her Faith Fairchild mystery series. It is actually two mysteries, that of a baby boy, named Christopher, left for a single woman named Mary to find in her goat barn (and lay in a manger) on Christmas Eve, and that of a murdered young woman left in an antique sleigh used as a holiday display. The story moves back and forth between Mary, Faith, and the mother of the baby for the first half of the book. The young woman’s story is taken up in the second half, and the baby story picks up speed and moves to a satisfying conclusion.
That’s not to say Body in the Sleigh is necessarily worth a read. The mystery of the baby is fully explored, but the young woman’s story feels a bit like it was slapped on top to keep with “The body in the…” titles of the series. If you like your fictional world filled with well-behaved children, caring neighbors, and people who do wrong only because of some deprivation in their backgrounds, you will love this book. Those who appreciate a Christian focus on the Christmas holiday will also fall for this one this one. In addition, recipes for many of the delicious-sounding dishes discussed are included. If it all that sounds a little too neat and upbeat — if you like your mysteries realistic and gritty — than skip this entry in the minister’s-wife-protagonist Faith Fairchild series. Librarians take note: the afterward is a love-letter to libraries and librarians.
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Short take: Lying With the Dead
December 13, 2009 · Leave a Comment
Wow! If you like dysfunctional family stories (a la Jonathan Frazen’s The Corrections), Lying with the Dead by Michael Mewshaw will knock your socks off. Told alternately from the points of view of three adult children with emotional scars worse than the physical ones left by their mother’s beatings, this story will get to you. Far from being sad, however, it’s often funny, and it draws you in, making you fond of the three misfits and wondering if the truth can ever be discerned through their controlling mother’s lies.
An edited version of this review was published in the December 2009 Indie Next List <http://www.indiebound.org/book/9781590513187/Michael-Mewshaw/Lying-Dead>.
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Short take: Big Man: Real Life & Tall Tales
November 5, 2009 · Leave a Comment
Big Man tells the story of Clarence Clemons, saxophonist in the E Street band and one of Bruce Springsteen’s oldest friends. Not a straightforward biography, the book is a compilation of short anecdotes and “legends” by Clemons and his good friend, television producer Don Reo. There’s plenty of sex, drugs, rock-n-roll, and name-dropping, but the tone is light, with plenty of humor and unique insights into one of the world’s great rock bands. Easy to pick and put down; a must-read for Springsteen and Clemons fans.

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Audrey Niffenegger’s Latest
September 24, 2009 · Leave a Comment
I will post my review of Her Fearful Symmetry: A Novel, Audrey Niffenegger’s lastest novel, very soon! But in the meantime, her literary agency wants you to know that they’re giving away copies of the book in a lottery to people who join the facebook fan page and email them at hfs@regal-literary.com.
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An Indie Next review
September 9, 2009 · Leave a Comment
Better late than never. My review of Young Woman and the Sea apparently made it into Indie Next and now is listed on Shelf Awareness.
http://news.shelf-awareness.com/ar/theshelf/2009-09-08/indiebound_other_indie_favorites.html
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